It was a dark, black night in bow and there was a full moon.. Donna was with a friend called Jade. They were walking and they came down an alley that they had not seen before. So Dona said ‘Why don’t we go down it’
‘Ok’said jade. They were walking and walking and finally they saw this gloomy castle with a sight saying ‘famous castle of secrets’
’Donna said ‘lets go in’ ‘ok’ jade said nervously, ‘open the door’ and it made a creaky sound. Jade jumped
‘Don’t worry’ said Donna as they walked in Donna and jade saw the dark makings and gothic windows.
’ Look over there’ said Donna
‘Where?’ said Jade
‘where are you Donna’ panicked jade she went to look for Donna something moved. She quickly turned around. Nothing was there.
‘Donna come out this is not funny’ she looked in 4 rooms but did not find her.
’ Help’ shouted dona ‘where are you? ‘jade went to look in all the but could not find her. I saw some more markings on the wall I run my finger over ‘aaarrrrrr’ it moved jade was freaked she look in all the rooms all except 1 room she opened the slowly when the horror when she saw Donna on the floor dead covered in black and red blood.’ Donna’ jade said sadly there was makings on her arm and her neck. then she felt someone or something breathe on her. She turned around and there was a man dressed in black gothic clothes and black hair and he was drooling.He had a knife with black and red blood on it. She run for the door and she ran and ran but she fell.he stabbed her once and died sumdle .cofed in her red blood but why black blood?
1098 years leater………………………………………………………………….
There was tosits, bob, Lydia, rob and Lewis was at an alley and they saw the sign ‘famous castle of secrets’ so they went in and the door creack.
‘Look how lolly this castle’said Lydia
‘wow’ they all said walking in the door
‘what shall me do now’ said bob
‘look’ said Lydia ponting to the wall
‘where?’ said lewis
‘on the wall there is makings’
they look at all the rooms but 1 then they went in to the last room and they saw blood stain’s.they went colouser to the bllod stain’s and it look like some one had written with the bllod somethink they look at it harder it says ‘death apon you if you shall be here’
‘oh my god’ said all of them at the same time
‘what shall we do’ said bob
‘I think we should go’ said rob
‘yer lets go’said Lydia as they all ran out
the tosits, bob, Lydia, rob and Lewis went to the ifortion deck
‘what is the history of the famous castle of secrets’ said lewis
the lady at the deck was typing then suddle she rise her head then said
‘er well it is a long storie’
‘well tell us’ said bob
‘ok well it all stared years a go when somethink hoorble lived there it was a thing in black but well anywell who evey went in there was lucky to get out alive beacse anyone who went in there were to be killed ….there was some people who went there were called dona and jade they went there and they was stapped to there death but befor then the thing in black lived for years it is said to have lived 50000 years ago beacese there was recode of about 8000 killeds but I thing something is there for a long time’
‘all those poor people’ said Lydia
‘you know what we should do’ said bob
‘we should get lods of people to fight this thing in black’
‘yer that be good and knock the house down’said all of them
so they worked hard and got 190 people to help kill it and nock down the house.they got people all over the contry and they waited till when it was ready to nock down the huse .
it was the day every body waited outside the house .they were all ready for bob to say go.
‘go’ shouted bob
and they all went in and out the house ‘the people where so mad they started hitting it with hamer. It was all down and they saw a secret door they all went down there they saw black and red lood stains and there was another door.lydia said ‘shall we open it’’er…….yes’said bob lewis open it slowly.when lewis open the door bats came out the room ‘aaarrrrrrrr’said Lydia and rob.Rob took the frist step into the room. They saw markings on the walls and fall. ‘what are they?’said rob ‘I don’t know lets look’said Lydia ‘I cant make the words out’
bob started to look at the gloomy room.it had black lase citon’s and there was a big box.
‘look at this’siad bob looking at the box
‘what’said rob and Lydia
‘look’
‘the box’
bob,rob,lewis and Lydia all look at the githic box that had the same markings as the walls.
‘do u think we should open it?’said rob
‘mmmm………..ok’said bob
so they all crowed round the box to see what was in there.when bob opend it a lod off dust came out.as the dust cleaed it was clead to see what was in their.
‘OMG!!!!!!!’ said Lydia
‘BONDS’ shouted Lydia
there must be about over 1000 bonds in the box.
‘I am out of here!!’said Lydia as she running out the hose
‘wait’as rob ran out too
‘come on lets look arud more’ said bob
‘ok’said lewis
bob and lewis saw another door and as they went throght the door and they saw more makings on the wall and this time on the fall. Bob and lewis look around and they kept finding the same markings on the wall and floor.lewis foud a deck and their on the dreck was a diry saying cry and die by jade roger
‘look at this it says cry and die’lewis said
‘lets take it back to show the others’
‘ok’
the next day………………………
lewis and bob got up Lydia and rob then showed them the book. Lydia and rob go up and came down stairs.
‘sit down and we will show you’ said bob
Lydia and rob sat down on the chair.
‘well….so what are we looking at’ said rob
lewis said ‘you know that room well their was a door in the wall and we went in that room and it look like it has not been clean for years any way their was a deck and on it.it had this dairy cry and die by jade roger’
‘and we what’d to show you’
‘can I look at this book’said Lydia
‘ok here’said bob
‘rite’ said Lydia starting to read the book
‘rite well shall I read it to you lot then’she said as she getting the book readly to read
‘ok’ she gasped
‘cry and die by jade Roger’
‘5th may 1950 to day we are moveing I have not see not the hose yet but I think it will be nice……………………………….i have seen I house and it is a castle and it is so big . I went inside and it has so many rooms I can get lost in. I look around and I can see in one of the rooms a nice beterful bed and an window with a deck.my mum said that they are about 16 rooms. I did not belive it but it was trueany way got to go and explo’
‘that’s the first day’said Lydia
‘we should waite till tomorrw’ said Lydia putting the dairy on the talble
‘ok’ all of they said
‘can we go to the bech today?’said bob
‘ok then’ said all of them
so Lydia, rob, bob and lewis were walking on the beach and they all sat down to look at the sea.
‘I wonder what will happen next for jade?’ said rob
‘I don’t know we can read more tomorrow ok’ said bob
‘ok’ lydia said
lewis , lydia , bob and rob all went home and sat down for some tea.they were talking about jade roger dairy.
‘tomorrow we can read more of it ok’said bob
‘yer well it is 1.37 am I am going to bed said lewis
‘ me too’ said lewis
‘and me’ said rob
‘see you tomorrow’ said bob
the next day…………………………………………………………………..
lewis , jade and rob were watieing for bob.
‘come on’ said jade
‘ok!!!’said bobo
bob came down the stairs and sat on the chair.rob pasted the dairy to
bob.
‘everybody sit down’ said bob
‘ok’
‘6th may 1950 I am in my room sitting on me bed litten to the birds and writeing.my mum is down stirs and today is the same day my dad died last year.i went to his grave and I put flowers their he die of being very ill.i am still sad but we don’t talk about it.
Well I have to go because I got to have my tea’
‘ do you want to read on?’said bob
‘ok’ said lewis
‘9th may 1950 my mum is going out tonight with a man called peter I think they should get maged.’
14th may 1950 sorry ii have not written in a long time, it is because peter took us out for lots of trips and walks. My mum in going out again I think it is good news.
15th may 1950 peter and my mum are getting marided. Cant watie. They are getting magied on the 19th may cant watie.
17th may 1950 my mum is getting ready for the magied.
18th mum and peter are getting magied tomorrow and I cant watie . peter is going to be living with us and he is so nice.
20th peter is taking us away for a cople on weeks
19th june 1950 sorry I for got the diry and I don’t like peter any more . he mad my mum cry and hit me .i cryed for hours so sad cant belive he hit me . I don’t like him and I don’t think mum likes him.
19th july 1950 that is it I am going to telll mum to run a way with me because he started to hit me realy hard and mum too. She crys a lot now. It is horrible too see her like this I hear her cry her to sleep. I try not to cry. So when she crys I give her a cudle and tell her it will be alright. Tell her to smile, make her some tea and help her thought.
29th july 1950 we are going to run away tonight to as far as away and I am backing food I am going to go down stairs. I am back but he said he will kill me if I leaf but I don’t care and I am going to leaf this here but if I do get killed theirs are my last words run away from evil bye’
‘ that is it’ said bob
‘I think we should put it some were’ said bob
they all agred and put it up on the shelf and went out the room I don’t think they will every forget jade roger.